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Book Review – Dungeon Crawler Carl

Dungeon Crawler Carl by Matt Dinniman is a science-fantasy LitRPG book that features game-like mechanics in an apocalyptic world. It’s the first of the Dungeon Crawler Carl book series.

After many recommendations from friends and family, I jumped into DCC with no expectations. I was familiar with LitRPGs, as I’d read many of them in comic book form, though not many in novel form. DCC follows Carl and his ex-girlfriend’s show-cat, Donut, as the world comes to an end and they must survive in a game-show/game-like dungeon while meeting eccentric cast of characters and other crawlers. The story is told in the first-person point of view.

To start off, the premise is unique, but as I mentioned, I am familiar with the genre so it wasn’t outside my area of expertise. One thing I was fond of is that the menu pop-ups in the novel were done well. As I mentioned before, there are a lot of video game mechanics that is in the novel but the novel did a great job at explaining the achievements and items the characters found and accomplished.

Another strength it had was the writing. The book is very easy to follow and to understand. The author did a great job of explaining what needed to be known in the context of the story. To me, it was an easy read. I also liked how the author showed glimpses behind the curtain of what was going on through Carl’s mind. The novel didn’t have much of Carl’s inner dialogue or his thoughts. So, the reader does need to infer things through the character’s actions and dialogue.

With the way the book starts — it’s very high-adrenaline, what’s-going-on-here, no-time-to-think vibes — there isn’t much time to know about Carl from before the dungeon, apart from the first chapter, where some of his life was told to us. Despite this, the author gives us glimpses of the time before and they’re very impactful. However, the author doesn’t linger on these moments and the story continues as there is an immediate danger or decision that needs to be addressed.

Speaking of the first chapter, I almost stopped reading the book because of it. The author repeated many things every few paragraphs that I wasn’t a fan of. Perhaps this is to help with memory retention, but for me, once is enough. That’s not to say that I don’t understand why the author kept repeating some things. Luckily, the writing style changed, and the repetition hasn’t occurred since.

There are many things that I liked about this book. For example, the nods to different cultures, like the gym, hoarding, and a certain group that resists modern medical practices. The author did not shy away from them at all, and I appreciate it.

Despite all of this, the novel didn’t leave a lasting impression on me. That’s not to say it was bad or not good. It was a fun read, and I enjoyed it, but that’s about it. I’m unsure whether it deserves all the hype it has from this one book, but I’ve heard from many sources that it’s not until later that it becomes better. While I continue to read the books, I am open to learning more about DCC’s world and the overarching story the novel touched upon.

My rating, 4/5.

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Book Review – The Fox King and the Heart of Frost

The Fox King and the Heart of Frost is a 2026 romantasy by Claire Meadows. It was released on June 18, 2026, on KU and as an ebook. Paperback is scheduled to release on July 16, and hardcover is in August. These will include a limited number of signed copies.

The Fox King and the Heart of Frost is about a witch, Evana, who runs away from a rot faerie prince who wants her for her magic. As Evana runs away, she ends up in Wildemire, injured and scared. She is rescued by the half-faerie Adrik, who then nourishes her with the aid of the townspeople. As Evana recovers from her injuries, she must contend with a predatory story and her growing feelings toward Adrik, while also keeping her magic a secret. Magic, she believes, is a monster, a curse.

However, trust doesn’t come easily for Evana or Adrik. They both hold secrets, and as the story progresses, they eventually start trusting each other and fall in love. When Evana’s past comes back to haunt her, she must dig deep within herself to overcome it. As Adrik’s secrets endanger the town and each other, they must work together to overcome them.

It is told primarily through first-person, but there are glimpses of point of view of other characters. Through what we learn about Evana and her magic, this makes perfect sense.

What I really liked about this book was the worldbuilding. The folklore elements made the book come to life and were an integral part of the story. Evana navigated through her deals with the spirits with wit and caution. The writing expertly showed how each spirit was as fickle as they come. If you showed them the proper respect, they would help you. However, someone who deals with spirits must keep on their toes to get what they want.

Another thing I enjoyed was the relationship between Evana and Adrik. The trust and distrust between characters were done so well. It wasn’t rushed. It was gradual, and every interaction was purposeful. The characters were very three-dimensional. They were complex. They had their own pasts to deal with, and it was written well.

The rest of the cast was also very intriguing to read about. Even as danger stalked their little town, I could feel how much they trusted Adrik and how much they relied on him. Those characters were memorable as well, and they had distinct personalities that let them shine on their own.

The character development was also enjoyable. Evana’s growth and acceptance of her magic were well deserved. It didn’t feel like it came out of nowhere. She learned to accept herself for who she was (a witch), which gave her the strength she needed when it counted most.

While this isn’t a weakness, I would have loved a map. I tend to be a visual learner, so having a map to see where everything is would have been helpful. Did it matter to the overall plot of the story? No.

One thing I could have done without was the prologue. The information from the prologue was gradually released throughout the story. Since the reader knows she’s being chased for her magic, the readers could have easily inferred that she was running away from something.

This brings me to my next point. The beginning chapters were very gripping. However, it slowed down between chapters three and eight/nine for me. I say this because it was easy to put the book down between those chapters, even as I dedicated time to reading. I didn’t put it down because of other commitments, etc. It made sense that it was slow because of the way Evana was rescued and who she came out of it. Past that, the pace does pick up and doesn’t stop.

In the beginning, the writing style was a bit hard to get through. The sentence structure was similar when it came to descriptions. What I mean is that the sentence was long with many adjectives to describe something, while including comparisons, and then it would continue to use adjectives to describe another thing. Eventually, it did flow a lot better, and it wasn’t bogged down with so many adjectives/comparisons.

Speaking of writing style. Some of the later descriptions were also lacking, but it wasn’t much. There were times when I couldn’t picture what was going on in the environment, like the character’s interaction with the environment. Another time was when the background suddenly shifted in the same scene was also a bit confusing. I know what the author intended by choosing this style, but I would have loved some transition.

Now, I do have to say, since the story deals with faeries and spirits, and for those who know about faeries/spirits, nothing is what it seems. The descriptions were meant to have a mythical feel, but I could have done less with them. I don’t need all these comparisons; tell me what it looks like. There’s beauty in being blunt. And if a writer wants to include it, use it sparingly and not in the same paragraph.

The book did have an intimacy scene between Evana and Adrik. There was a bit of a slow burn through the book, and a lot of teases. The intimate scene wasn’t too graphic. It was a good balance of what was happening and how the characters were experiencing it.

The Fox King and the Heart of Frost is a tale of self-healing, overcoming dark pasts, and finding strength within yourself. It was character-driven with medium stakes. Readers who enjoy friends-to-lovers, folklore elements, and a forest that eats people will enjoy this book.

Overall, the story was enjoyable to read. The weaknesses I mentioned are more about reader preference than anything else.

Rating 4/5

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Life’s Latest Chapter

2025 ended with great news for me. While I’m not able to share the news just yet, let’s just say everything I’ve done so far has been worth it. I’m excited about what’s coming and hope to keep the momentum going.

I’ve been hard at work finishing my MFA program. My last semester start last week and then, I’ll officially completed graduate school. It’s been a dream of mine since I finished my undergrad and I’m happy to report that I’ve made it happen.

As such, writing my thesis novel has taken up a lot of my time. While I’m still unsure whether to try traditional publishing or self-publishing, I plan to wait until receiving my professor’s editorial letter at the end of the semester.

Going forward, I plan on submitting one short story a month to various press with open submissions. I want increase my chances of being published and short stories allow me extra practice with shorter content. As such, my January submission has been sent so I’m looking for a February’s submission.

Another thing I’m implementing is Patreon. While I haven’t figured out every detail, I think it’s time I move away from Wattpad. The Creator’s Program has been a great help, but it’s time to try something else. My rough plan is to post chapters on Patreon, much like I did on Wattpad, but behind a subscription. My success on Wattpad showed me that my work is worth it.

A busy year lies ahead, but I’m looking forward to tackling it one step at a time.

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Camp NaNoWriMo & Everything Else

It’s been a week or so since I started Camp Nation Novel Writing Month. I’ve written 20k words so far. The goal is 60k words for this month. I’m trying to rewrite a 30k word novella into (at least) an 80k word YA dark fantasy novel.

A huge reason I’m doing this is to start my indie author journey. By that, I mean that I want to self-publish this novel. I haven’t gotten all the details straightened out just yet but it’s something I want to try out.

This past weekend I spent it researching different ways to go about doing this and I think I can start with a Kickstarter as a way to cover the expenses needed for self-publishing. I’ve seen other authors on the website as well. Now, there is a lot to do in general and despite the fact that I’m not done writing yet, I want to start thinking about it. I want to work towards that goal so whenever I feel like I can’t do this, I can remember my goal and gain new inspiration.

The more I thought about it, I might be better off publishing the story as an eBook first (when writing/editing, etc. is finished) and then try to have physical copies of the book. Maybe if I do it this way, there won’t be many risks of the Kickstarter failing because the book is out there.

Overall, I haven’t decided on a way to go about self-publishing just yet. I want to concentrate on writing first. However, I’m glad to have a goal in mind and I really want to make it happen.

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Camp NaNoWriMo Prep – July 2023

I’m officially starting prep work for the upcoming Camp National Novel Writing Month. The novel I’m working on is currently a novella at 30k words. I’m planning on adding 60k words this July. That’s about 2k words daily. In order to do that, I’m going to need almost every planned out.

Luckily because I’ve already written the ‘main story’, it’s just a matter of adding intercepting stories and events to it. I’ve also added more characters but I’ll have to set up motivations/ wants for them and incorporate it into the story. I don’t want them to end up filling a page for the sake of the word count.

When I first wrote this novella, I hadn’t planned too much for the world. I got the basics of worldbuilding but I need to flesh it out more.

First I would need . . .

  • Lore/ Worldbuilding – at least the inner workings of certain organizations, etc. that will be necessary to the novel.
  • I need character motivations and how they will affect the story
  • Lastly, I would need to write down the plot points. This will help me add different characters into the story without making seem like they were added last minute.

Those are what I can think of right off the top of my head. I might think of more but at least I have a faint of idea of what to work on next week.