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Book Review – Dungeon Crawler Carl

Dungeon Crawler Carl by Matt Dinniman is a science-fantasy LitRPG book that features game-like mechanics in an apocalyptic world. It’s the first of the Dungeon Crawler Carl book series.

After many recommendations from friends and family, I jumped into DCC with no expectations. I was familiar with LitRPGs, as I’d read many of them in comic book form, though not many in novel form. DCC follows Carl and his ex-girlfriend’s show-cat, Donut, as the world comes to an end and they must survive in a game-show/game-like dungeon while meeting eccentric cast of characters and other crawlers. The story is told in the first-person point of view.

To start off, the premise is unique, but as I mentioned, I am familiar with the genre so it wasn’t outside my area of expertise. One thing I was fond of is that the menu pop-ups in the novel were done well. As I mentioned before, there are a lot of video game mechanics that is in the novel but the novel did a great job at explaining the achievements and items the characters found and accomplished.

Another strength it had was the writing. The book is very easy to follow and to understand. The author did a great job of explaining what needed to be known in the context of the story. To me, it was an easy read. I also liked how the author showed glimpses behind the curtain of what was going on through Carl’s mind. The novel didn’t have much of Carl’s inner dialogue or his thoughts. So, the reader does need to infer things through the character’s actions and dialogue.

With the way the book starts — it’s very high-adrenaline, what’s-going-on-here, no-time-to-think vibes — there isn’t much time to know about Carl from before the dungeon, apart from the first chapter, where some of his life was told to us. Despite this, the author gives us glimpses of the time before and they’re very impactful. However, the author doesn’t linger on these moments and the story continues as there is an immediate danger or decision that needs to be addressed.

Speaking of the first chapter, I almost stopped reading the book because of it. The author repeated many things every few paragraphs that I wasn’t a fan of. Perhaps this is to help with memory retention, but for me, once is enough. That’s not to say that I don’t understand why the author kept repeating some things. Luckily, the writing style changed, and the repetition hasn’t occurred since.

There are many things that I liked about this book. For example, the nods to different cultures, like the gym, hoarding, and a certain group that resists modern medical practices. The author did not shy away from them at all, and I appreciate it.

Despite all of this, the novel didn’t leave a lasting impression on me. That’s not to say it was bad or not good. It was a fun read, and I enjoyed it, but that’s about it. I’m unsure whether it deserves all the hype it has from this one book, but I’ve heard from many sources that it’s not until later that it becomes better. While I continue to read the books, I am open to learning more about DCC’s world and the overarching story the novel touched upon.

My rating, 4/5.

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Book Review – Shadow of Night

Shadow of Night is a historical fantasy book by Deborah Harkness. It’s the sequel to A Discovery of Witches. The book picks up directly where A Discovery of Witches ended.

I was excited to start this book because I enjoyed A Discovery of Witches so much. Deborah Harkness brings the reader directly into Elizabethan London, where Diana and Matthew must search for Ashmole 782 while encountering the School of Night and other secrets from Matthew’s past.

Like the first book, it’s entirely written in first-person point of view, so the reader only gets Diana’s view of the events. Since Diana is a historian, readers get rich worldbuilding. Everything gets dissected and explained, including the setting, attire, and food. Those who enjoy a deep dive into historical fantasy will definitely enjoy this novel. However, there’s a caveat. More on this later.

What I enjoyed about this novel was the relationship between Matthew and Dianna. They acted like a couple, and they were still themselves; their own characters. Each had their needs and wants, and they weren’t merged into one person. The relationship felt like a tug of war as the couple navigated situations.

 This was largely due to getting to know more about Matthew, his family members, and his hidden life. It was a source of conflict, but also a source of growth between the two.

One thing I wanted to know more about was magic. Diana had a goal of learning more about her power, and while there were sections of the book that helped, it was put on the back burner for the rest of the book. Almost everything about the plot was about the political landscape. While it was understandable why it happened, I wished, as a reader, we had gotten more about it.

Part three of the five parts was the best in my opinion. It combined the historical details of the story from parts one and two, and it revealed more about Matthew’s life. It gave more time to the couple to act like a couple.

The biggest ‘complaint’ that I have for this book is the description. When the plot happened, it was great. I couldn’t stop reading. Then, the description came, and it was a slog. At first, I didn’t mind it because characters did go back in time, but then it felt like that’s all there was. Then, the plot would happen, and that would be great. Then, more description, and it was one or the other. It was never a combination of both until part three, but then parts four and five went back to the same formula.

I understand that as the characters traveled, description was necessary, but there were times that I thought it was too much.

The confrontation with two characters near the end was a bit jarring. Coming from a certain character, I wasn’t too surprised. However, that character had been ‘dropped,’ and then he suddenly sprang up like a ‘got you’ moment.

Many characters were dropped, only to be mentioned suddenly at the end. It felt like Dianna/reader was left out of a lot of things story-wise. I saw it as intentional because Matthew would keep Diana away from things, but it felt like Dianna was a passenger most of the time.

Overall, this book was not for me. There were many instances when the description got so detailed that I had to put the book down for days before I could pick it up again. I kept giving it a chance because the plot was good when it appeared on the page.

This is why I gave it a rating of three out of five. It’s not a bad rating, because I think those who enjoyed the description will love this book. For me, I was on the fence. It wasn’t terrible, but I wanted less of that.

Maturity-wise, it did have some themes and perhaps triggers for some people. Matthew and Diana are adults, and they do adult things. However, it wasn’t explicitly written.

I will continue with the third book. I made it through the second book, so I’m hoping the buildup and conclusion were worth it.