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Book Review – Dungeon Crawler Carl

Dungeon Crawler Carl by Matt Dinniman is a science-fantasy LitRPG book that features game-like mechanics in an apocalyptic world. It’s the first of the Dungeon Crawler Carl book series.

After many recommendations from friends and family, I jumped into DCC with no expectations. I was familiar with LitRPGs, as I’d read many of them in comic book form, though not many in novel form. DCC follows Carl and his ex-girlfriend’s show-cat, Donut, as the world comes to an end and they must survive in a game-show/game-like dungeon while meeting eccentric cast of characters and other crawlers. The story is told in the first-person point of view.

To start off, the premise is unique, but as I mentioned, I am familiar with the genre so it wasn’t outside my area of expertise. One thing I was fond of is that the menu pop-ups in the novel were done well. As I mentioned before, there are a lot of video game mechanics that is in the novel but the novel did a great job at explaining the achievements and items the characters found and accomplished.

Another strength it had was the writing. The book is very easy to follow and to understand. The author did a great job of explaining what needed to be known in the context of the story. To me, it was an easy read. I also liked how the author showed glimpses behind the curtain of what was going on through Carl’s mind. The novel didn’t have much of Carl’s inner dialogue or his thoughts. So, the reader does need to infer things through the character’s actions and dialogue.

With the way the book starts — it’s very high-adrenaline, what’s-going-on-here, no-time-to-think vibes — there isn’t much time to know about Carl from before the dungeon, apart from the first chapter, where some of his life was told to us. Despite this, the author gives us glimpses of the time before and they’re very impactful. However, the author doesn’t linger on these moments and the story continues as there is an immediate danger or decision that needs to be addressed.

Speaking of the first chapter, I almost stopped reading the book because of it. The author repeated many things every few paragraphs that I wasn’t a fan of. Perhaps this is to help with memory retention, but for me, once is enough. That’s not to say that I don’t understand why the author kept repeating some things. Luckily, the writing style changed, and the repetition hasn’t occurred since.

There are many things that I liked about this book. For example, the nods to different cultures, like the gym, hoarding, and a certain group that resists modern medical practices. The author did not shy away from them at all, and I appreciate it.

Despite all of this, the novel didn’t leave a lasting impression on me. That’s not to say it was bad or not good. It was a fun read, and I enjoyed it, but that’s about it. I’m unsure whether it deserves all the hype it has from this one book, but I’ve heard from many sources that it’s not until later that it becomes better. While I continue to read the books, I am open to learning more about DCC’s world and the overarching story the novel touched upon.

My rating, 4/5.

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Food Timeline

food history

Now that I’m feeling better, I can put this put. It’s a neat image that I found on Pinterest. The website gives you a timeline on Food, where specific food began, and the start recipes with certain food items. This is a great tool if, like me, gets obsessed over learning if people ate ice-cream during a certain period of time or not.

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Court Positions – Fantasy Writing

It’s been a bit hectic this last few day. I went on a mini vacation and my connection to the internet wasn’t that great. Hence, the delay in posting. It also didn’t help that my flights kept getting moved around because of the weather. Needless to say, it was a long week.

For today, here’s a post I found on pinterest concerning court positions.

court positions

 

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Writing Sample – Jewel Knights

Instead of a writing prompt, today I want to share something that I wrote. It’s a story that I created a long time ago but it has only recently made any progress. Somewhere online, that I don’t remember now, I read that oneself isn’t a bad writer. It just so happens that your current skills aren’t enough to realize the image/ ideas that you have in your head. This resonated a lot with me. That’s why, I’m proud to share what I have written.

A light rainy mist began to fall against the stained-glass window as Lydia stood motionless in the headmistress’s office. The soft rain kissed the window portraying the first wave of the heaven stars falling from the sky. Lydia could feel the warmth from the fire burning in the hearth to her right against her body. The warmth had seeped into her clothes, relaxing her muscles and spreading a small drowsy spell upon the trainee. But despite the warmth and the laziness of the day, Lydia remained in her posture; hands straight down her sides, back straight and eyes looking forward.

               The headmistress shuffled around a few parchment sheets upon her large oak desk. Her head dress was titled slightly back exposing white blonde hair. Upon entering the room half an hour ago, Lydia had noticed the dark circles underneath the usually cheerful brown eyes. On further inspection, Lydia could faintly see all the flaws in the headmistress’ attire; the wrinkles and the once beautiful shade of beige had turned into a light yellow.

               “You graduate in six months.”

               “Yes ma’am,” Lydia answered, tightening her stance.

               She waited for a few minutes hoping the headmistress would keep talking. However, the silence continued.

               “If I may,” Lydia began. “Why exactly have you summoned me?”

               “Do know about the town of Loukussa?”

               “It’s a mining town,” Lydia supplied. “They located near the Artican Mountains. It’s not very prosperous at the moment because of the lack of use for Kravite.”

               “A heaven star fell near Loukussa a few moons ago,” the headmistress explained. “The Northern Order sent in their warriors and they were successful.”

               Lydia frowned but kept her silence.

               “However, activity has been reported near that area and Gylaw fears his followers are starting to think of him as incompetent. Due to this, Gylaw has called in a favor.” The Headmistress placed the parchment sheets on her desk. “The Northern warriors’ faces are known, and we want to keep this a discreet as possible. If you return from your mission successfully then consider yourself a Jeweled Knight.”

               “Thank you for the opportunity, ma’am,” Lydia said. “I won’t fail.”

               “You are to report tomorrow at the east gate. Further instructions about your mission will be provided then.”

               “I understand.”

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Lore – Before or After?

I believe that no matter what type of story you write, there’s going to be lore involved. The story/world that you create is going to have history. I don’t mean history of how you came up with the idea. I mean, history as in the world and everyone in that world is going to have a past.

Lore is one of the last things I think about through the creative process. Typically, I tend to dream up of a certain type of character and try to place them in all types of settings until I find one that they fit in. I don’t think about the lore until much later. It usually comes into fruition all on its own.

As the story develops, the ‘truth’ of the world starts to unravel bit by bit. I find it easier to let the lore develop on its own. If I need something to be held true like a kingdom invaded a thousand years ago or something along those lines then, I just have that happen.

The way I tend to create the lore is by starting out with general concepts. I look at the big picture like a major event. After I have some of that figure out, I look closer at the details. I mentioned an invading army before. With looking at the details, I figure out why the army invaded, what was the cause, who invaded who, etc.

Personally, I think having an overall concept of what you like the lore to be is a good place to start. There’s nothing concrete and the details/concepts can be molded to whatever it needs to be for the story.

At times, when I set something in stone before the story, I find it difficult to incorporate it into the story. For some reason, my brain is stuck in that little box I created before and I end up stressing myself. It’s good to have some flexibility when writing lore and everything else. Sometimes, inspiration strikes when you least expect it.